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Many people say that companies, factory owners and privates tour operates should pay the bills for cleaning up pollution, instead of government. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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There is no denying that the expansion of enterprises today has resulted in a corresponding increase in
pollution
 levels. Some citizens argue that corporations, factories, and private tours should foot the tab for
pollution
 cleanup rather than the
government
.
This
 article will argue
for
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why they, and not the
government
, should be in charge of
this
 matter. Many people believe that
government
 resources would be better spent on other issues facing the country than
than
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pollution
. Even if the
government
 has instituted campaigns and legislation to curb
pollution
 using the tax dollars of the people, the problem shows no signs of abating since its root cause isn't being addressed.
For instance
, manufacturers are forbidden from dumping chemical and hazardous waste into the river, which carries stiff penalties and perhaps prison time if
this
 regulation is broken. It continues to fail and increases costs for the
government
 and the public.
Consequently
, individuals responsible for the situation should foot the price. To me, it seems
sense
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 for businesses, factories, and private excursions to foot these costs. Businesses like
this
 often contribute to
pollution
Correct article usage
the pollution
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 of water and air with their waste products. Some examples of
this
 include the fact that despite the existence of regulations, chemical waste is still being illegally dumped into rivers and large manufacturing and services that release poisonous gases into the atmosphere are still being offered. It makes no difference if these companies continue to turn a blind eye no matter the situation or what the authorities do.
This
 is why it is right that they
be
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are
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 the ones tasked with preventing and removing
pollution
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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