In order to Spend a quality life, some say, people need to have more money and some say people need free time. What do you think is important. What are the other things which are required to have a quality life?

Nowadays, part of individuals
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that having more cash to lay out a
quality
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however
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others
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believe
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need leisure
time
. I think both are significant
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to spend a better
life
in
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today's
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era and other objects are
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objectives
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the objectives
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of money and
time
as well as other
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things
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thinks
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need
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to have a
quality
of
life
with a reasonable conclusion. To commence with that the funds are vital to
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the needs. To explain it more, in
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modern
time
every contemporary thing
included
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in
good
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level of
life
and those products
purchased
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with cash, so they have more money to
complet
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complete
the
requiremnets
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requirements
of
a
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quality
of
life
.
Secondly
, free
time
essential
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to use those things which make a
quality
of
life
and if they
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not enjoy that
life
for which they earn capital
then
that is
not a standard of
life
.
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, In
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countries humankind work
in
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the weekdays and on the
weekend
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they enjoy those days by spending
time
outside, like visiting
to
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the beaches.
Furthermore
, The family is
one
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another
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factor
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factor
in order to spend a good
life
. To spell it out more, they have money and
time
, but if they
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having
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family
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a family
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with whom they utilised
there
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their
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time
and enjoy
thier
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their
life
.
Moreover
, a person
find
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happiness in
quality
of
life
and
that is
only become when they have relations. So human
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need a family to lay out a class of
life
. In conclusion, currency and
time
major
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point
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of the
quality
of
life
and by joining these two a standard of
life
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occurs
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occure
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occurs
. Whereas family is
other
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key point of
life
, so it
also
compulsory,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial resources
  • Life satisfaction
  • Mental health
  • Free time
  • Work-life balance
  • Excessive
  • Imbalances
  • Quality of life
  • Healthcare
  • Recreational activities
  • Social connections
  • Community bonds
  • Personal fulfillment
  • Sense of purpose
  • Financial stability
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