Modern technology has made it possible for many people to work at home most of the time rather than going to an office every day. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working at home? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples

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With modern

technology

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employees can work from

home

, which can save more

time

than going to an

office

everyday

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every day

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. There are some advantages and

disadvantages

this

opinion. The

first

advantage of working from

home

is saving

time

and money. When working at

home

you do not have to go to the

office

at 8a.

or 9a.

and back

home

at 6 p.

or 7 p.

, that

time

you can have a cup of tea or cook a meal for your family.

Besides

that, the traffic at

this

time

is so bad and you will be stuck in

this

thirty or an hour. The

second

advantage when you do not have to go to the

office

is comfort. You can work everywhere in your house as long as you are interested and comfortable.

Beside

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the advantage of working from

home

, it still has some

disadvantages

. With some people working at the

office

is better than working at

home

. Because they have more motivation when they see others working.

For example

, I can not focus on working when I do it alone or working at

home

. But when I do it at the coffee shop or library, I can see people who are working so hard and

this

makes me feel more motivated. The other disadvantage of working from

home

is the communication with other employees. Working at

home

you can not talk with them, you just can communicate with them by

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call or through a chat application like messenger or telegram. You can not have more connections if you do it for a long

time

. To sum up, working at

home

can save

your

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time

and feel comfortable. But it still has some

disadvantages

. Working at

home

, you do not have enough motivation for working efficiency and more connection with other employees. I think I will choose

working

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to work

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at the

office

because of

disadvantages

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the disadvantages

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