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Some people think that work is the most important thing in a person's life. Without the success of a career, life becomes meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that having a successful
career
 is a key factor to live a
life
 full of joy. I partly agree with that argument and the reasons will be explained below. There are various ways to become a happy
person
 in
this
 contemporary world. Even though
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 having a good business
life
 is the main factor to enjoy a
life
 which is worth living, it is not the only option due to the fact that there are more precious things in an individual’s
life
such
 as building a family, gaining unforgettable memories and having friendships which have strong bonds.
For instance
, if a
person
 has an issue to handle in the working
life
, he/she will need a friend to share
this
 situation
thus
this
person
 will feel less stressed.
In addition
 to
this
, it is a necessity that shares the moments which make them feel happy with their friends for
this
person
. Their
life
 becomes meaningful when they share their memories with their friends rather than having a successful
career
.
On the other hand
, there is no doubt that the biggest part of a human’s
life
 becomes from working
life
. Even in a day, every people spend many hours doing their jobs and
this
 means if a
person
 loves his/her profession,
this
person
 will be happy in his/her
life
. For
such
 a
person
, more success in a
career
 means a more meaningful
life
. In conclusion, there are some ways to make a
life
 meaningful
such
 as having a good
career
 or real friends. It depends on the perspectives of individuals and how they make their lives more precious. Some might only be happy with walking through their
career
 path.
However
, others will choose different values.
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