Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: - Thank them for the photos and for the holiday. - Explain why you didn't write earlier. - Invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Cijo / Jason,
Hope you
guys
are doing good
. I just saw the Change the word
well
pictures
that was
taken by you Change the verb form
were
guys
during my stay at your place. Surprisingly, the pictures
have come out so well.
Honestly, I was not expecting any pictures
from that day especially
considering how tired we all were after attending the wedding. I had Add the comma(s)
, especially
such
a nice time with you guys
and thanks for the pictures
, they just look fantabulous
.
I'm sorry, I couldn't write to Correct word choice
fantastic
you'll
earlier since I was not able to access my Verb problem
you
mails
Correct your spelling
emails
due to
some issue with the internet connection here. Also
, I do not check my personal mails
that often until I happened to come to my Fix the agreement mistake
mail
neighbors
place today and randomly checked my inbox.
Seriously, I would really appreciate it if you Change the spelling
neighbours
guys
could come over to my place during the Eid holidays that
is
coming up next week. We can Change the verb form
are
also
plan for a road trip to Hatta and Umm Al Quwain while
you are here.
Looking forwarding
to seeing you Change the form of the verb
forward
guys
soon.
Best Regards,
Vipin AbrahamSubmitted by keerthy9209 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a single clear idea and flows smoothly into the next to improve cohesion.
task achievement
Try to avoid minor spelling mistakes such as 'you'll' which should be 'you all.'
task achievement
The letter covers all the required points thoroughly.
task achievement
The tone is friendly and appropriate for a letter to friends.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a good logical structure, with a clear beginning, middle, and end.
coherence cohesion
The closing is natural and provides a clear next step.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite