Some people think that governments of developing countries should introduce new technology to people to improve their quality of life, while others believe that they should provide free education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Several factors and methods are required in order to improve the
life
quality
of people for those living in developing countries. Education
,among the factors, is highly important. While it is believed that new technology
should be implemented, some people believe in the power of free education
. I, personally view both as vital as I will explain in this
essay.
Education
is the core of human life
. It allows individuals to grow, develop and excel in their majors. Free education
is considered a necessity since it would introduce everyone from all backgrounds to access knowledge and information more equally. Through the news I read, these past few months, some students have had to quit school due to their financial circumstances. This
could result in a loss of potential specialists in careers such
as doctors, and teachers. Moreover
, without education
, there would not be innovations or any social developments.Thus
, introducing free education
would, in return, could not only provide the whole nation with the opportunities to expand growth but also
develop skilled labourers to push the country's economy.
In the fast-paced world, we no longer compete in the concept of the free market
only. Rather, the market
these days is all about producers who are capable of both quality
and quantity ,especially products that are complicated to make, requiring both techniques and special knowledge. Therefore
, technology
should be applied and introduced to boost the abilities of the manufacturers. If they adopt all the methods and techniques, they would be able to compete in the market
world. This
would result in the market
share of the product, job opportunities for workers and also
better life
quality
of people
. From my personal experience, I have experienced an old friend replacing an old method with a new one using Change preposition
for people
technology
. The result is incredibly unexpected since he was able to gain a lot more profits and the feedback is wholly positive.
In conclusion, though free education
is a major factor in improving the life
quality
of the nation's population, new technology
should also
be implemented together with free education
to provide opportunities and allow the nation to grow.Submitted by poonpunchy on
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