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Writing Samples
Band 6

ou work for a small company. You need to arrange for some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter explain why you want to take time off work give details of how long you will be away suggest how you will make up for the lost time You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Mr. Kumar, I would like to inform you that am planning to take a break from
work
. As you know
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 have been working continuously
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 many months without taking any leaves
due to
 the very tight timeline of our projects because of
this
 spending
time
 with my family has reduced by a lot. We have planned a short trip to Dubai with family members for 2 weeks to relax with family and get away from
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work
 for a certain period of
time
.
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 would
also
 need 1 additional week
time
 for the before and after travel. I know there are many works we have yet to complete and
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 do have a plan to avoid any delays in delivering the projects to the clients. Will do an additional overtime for the next couple of weeks to complete 50%
work
 prior to my travel. since the delivery date for the clients will be after my return only so I could finish the rest of the
work
 upon my return. I hope you understand the importance of my
time
 off. Yours faithfully Vetriselvan
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suitable writing tone
Enhance the tone by using more formal language consistently, such as replacing 'break from work' with 'leave of absence.'
complete response
Ensure a complete response by providing precise dates for your leave, enhancing clarity.
logical structure
You've maintained a clear structure with distinct paragraphs for each part of the task, aiding in coherence and cohesion.
greeting and closing
The letter appropriately begins and ends with suitable formal greetings and closings.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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