Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

At the present

time

via the development of technology, people easier to have technology devices

with

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a cheap price for some

model

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.

However

,

kids

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nowadays

nowsaday

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nowadays

do not have beautiful childhood like us before, they just spend the whole day playing online games and getting served

from

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their mother and father without any help even

move

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out of their room is a difficult thing. Honestly, I completely think

this

is a negative development for

children

at a new age wasting their childhood just for playing

smartphones

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on smartphones

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.

Firstly

, using mobile devices for a long

time

and a long period is to make

children

become

more and more lazy

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lazier and lazier

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. They just

lieing

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lying

living

on

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bed

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the bed

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and watch some

non-sense

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videos on the Internet.

Furthermore

, everything they do will depend on smartphones.

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,

kids

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if kids

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cooking

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something without their

parent

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help,

they

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will not know what to do and they just need to

opening

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their phones to search

how

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for how

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to cook but do not know how to avoid accidents and

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the consequence

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consequence

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consequences

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of not following the correct steps.

Secondly

,

children

will become less sociable if they use too much

time

and not

to

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go out and

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make

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mak

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friends,

kids

can easily

cheated

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by

the

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scammers through digital platforms on the Internet.

Moreover

, wasting

to

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much

time

to play

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games will make their eyes painful and harmful if

using

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used

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for

a

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long term.

For instance

,

kids

may

be

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apply

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click

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clicking

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in

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on

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some

deep-web

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deep web

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where

the

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stolen information from other people, terrible video clips and disgusting

thing

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appear. They may be lost

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their mind

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mind

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and become crazy if they watch those terrible videos and images.

Hence

, everything will out of control if they try to do that, especially their parents will be dis... In conclusion,

children

should not

spending

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mobile phones too much a day, they should

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out meet some new friends and have a

happiness

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childhood.