You have rented an apartment recently, but you are facing some problems. Write a letter to the landlord: • Describe the details of the problems • How are these affecting your family • Ask for possible solutions

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Dear landlord, I am writing

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letter to bring to your notice an issue which I have been facing daily and regret to have

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kind of experience as water taps are being leaked despite the back-to-back repair.

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, we

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noticed that a few lights are not functioning even after replacing them with brand new lights and switches too. As you heard, we will be at great risk as

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leaking water may create fungus and evolving infections around the home.

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, we are more anxious about the entire family's health.

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, the entire family sitting in one room to do their school work and my office work and not sure how to focus on the assignments and I strongly believe that

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will lead to a new problem if we did not act fast.

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, I would ask for some solutions to overcome these issues and I would really appreciate it if you could fix them immediately. we have an expert in our town and you may contact them to have a quick look to fix it as we cannot carry

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one for a longer time. I am ready to pay their service charges if required. I look forward to hearing your response to

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letter and I wish all these issues will be gone away and live in a good community. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Fri Sep 02 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

232 words

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