You have rented an apartment recently, but you are facing some problems. Write a letter to the landlord: • Describe the details of the problems • How are these affecting your family • Ask for possible solutions

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Dear landlord, I am writing

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letter to bring to your notice an issue which I have been facing daily and regret to have

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kind of experience as water taps are being leaked despite the back-to-back repair.

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, we

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noticed that a few lights are not functioning even after replacing them with brand new lights and switches too. As you heard, we will be at great risk as

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leaking water may create fungus and evolving infections around the home.

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, we are more anxious about the entire family's health.

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, the entire family sitting in one room to do their school work and my office work and not sure how to focus on the assignments and I strongly believe that

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will lead to a new problem if we did not act fast.

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, I would ask for some solutions to overcome these issues and I would really appreciate it if you could fix them immediately. we have an expert in our town and you may contact them to have a quick look to fix it as we cannot carry

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one for a longer time. I am ready to pay their service charges if required. I look forward to hearing your response to

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letter and I wish all these issues will be gone away and live in a good community. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

lakshma999Fri Sep 02 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

232 words

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You have rented an apartment recently, but you are facing some problems. Write a letter to the landlord: • Describe the details of the problems • How are these affecting your family • Ask for possible solutions

Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion!

The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Schools are no longer needed because students could find so much information on the Internet and study at home. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion

social media is becoming increasingly popular among all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantage of social media outweight the disadvange?