Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case ? Do you think is a positive or negative development?

In

this

contemporary area, a wide range of

children

are exposed to technology,

such

as smartphones that

this

is the main gadget that has filled the spare

time

of

children

for hours. The Young generation plays a crucial role in the prospect of society,

this

begs the question; are the negative aspects of

this

development, outweigh the positives? I subscribe to the notion that would effects

children

imperfectly.

First

and foremost contributing factors that take the

children

on an important part of the list is because of that they are vulnerable and immature. To explain , juveniles have a deep passion for seeking on the internet and finding new attractive matters. As a

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content that would increase violence and vandalism in the

children

. In ,addition research has shown that not only using a cellphone as a faster and portable gadget would not be lucrative but

also

would intensify their exposure to harmful content .

Secondly

, due to

phone

addiction among

children

, the rate of

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phone

increased.

This

phenomenon leads to disruption in their learning course of action. Regarding positive aspects,

this

is an absolute privilege having the young generation that has been accustomed to technology as fast as they could by their smarts

phone

. To illustrate, governments do not need to make plans to learn new technology. In another ,scenario

children

waste their

time

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.

Hence

they need to take more

time

on their curriculums. Contrary, smartphone limits their opportunities to go out and be with

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online version. Ultimately they would feel depressed . To conclude, nowadays numerous

children

are taking

time

on their cellphone dramatically. Wasting

time

and exposing bad content are the negative aspects of

this

issue. There is no doubt that those reasons convert

children

into an important case.