More people is moving to the big city to live and work. What are the reasons and results of this trend?

There has been a phenomenon that more and more people are moving to big
cities
to live and work. Some say
such
a trend brings about a negative result; some have the opposite opinions. I think there are some reasons behind is, and they will be explained in the following paragraphs.
First
, there are more job opportunities in big
cities
. As we know, due to technological development, the whole world is more globalized.
Therefore
, there are hundreds and thousands of new jobs that are formed and most of them take place in big
cities
.
Besides
, most big and international companies are constantly located in megacities;
hence
, if young people are seeking well-paid jobs,
then
big
cities
have more chances than small towns. It's worth mentioning that working in megacities is advantageous to the younger generation to gain working experience.
For instance
, the quality of your colleagues might be better, and you can learn countless new things,
such
as dealing with international clients, from them.
Second
, big
cities
are more international and convenient. Take me as an example. I lived in a small town in Germany for two years; all my neighbours could only speak German, and there were only some traditional German restaurants;
hence
, my life wasn't idyllic there. My living standard improved a lot after I moved to Amsterdam because there are innumerable exotic restaurants, and life is convenient here; public transport can take you to your wished destination, and supermarkets open on Sunday.
However
,
this
trend might have some negative impacts.
For instance
, causing an unbalanced development. It's commonplace that big
cities
are consistently attractive to young people. Not only because of all the lucrative occupations but
also
for opening eyes.
Nevertheless
, should the younger generation move to big
cities
, the development in rural areas can be worsened.
As a result
, these areas can be even poorer. In conclusion, these are two main reasons and one result of
this
trend.
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