Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear neighbour,
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am sad to hear the noise
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disturbance

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complaint you wrote to me. It was a busy week for us, if you know it or not my son came back home from abroad after
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completing

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completeting
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his higher studies. His
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home was a big surprise for us, and his wonderful grades
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on

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his final exam calls out
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for

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celebration. Everything had to be done
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on

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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

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short

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notice,
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almost felt
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is my enemy. I had to contact all our relatives to inform them about the small gathering and kept on for
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a couple

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of days. I am extremely sorry for all
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inconvenience
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inconvience
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and all disturbance you have
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tolerated

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during the past few days, sincerely accept my apology and
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hope you understand
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situation
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. All events and family gatherings have come to an end and you can expect us and our neighbourhood to be peaceful just like it was. thank you , your neighbour

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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