Some people believe teenagers should concentrate on all subjects, even ones they do not enjoy. Others, however, believe that teenagers should only focus on the subjects they are bast at or find most interesting. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In mostly all schools, some

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are compulsory for

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until they reach a specific grade. Some

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believe that even though

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dislike some

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, they should concentrate anyway on them. On the

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, some

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believe that

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should focus only on the

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that they find the most interesting. I believe that both opinions have their importance which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs. I personally think that all

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set by the secondary schools should be taught to all

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irrespective they like or dislike the

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because they should get the basic lessons of Science, Art, English, Maths,etc, which are important and allows them to get the basic academical knowledge.

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, when the

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reach a specific age and grade, they should get the choice to select the special field they want to study either technical side or science

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. Some parents have the tendency to choose the fields of

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it leads to

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complete disinterest and disgust from these young students. Facts have proved

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that when young

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are not given the opportunity to choose

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they like, they quit

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earlier and sometimes become delinquents. Admittedly, one drawback for young

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to choose their

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is that they think they have the right to do what they want at

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. Whereas, if

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and regulations are set

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them, they know that they have to follow the

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of their

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and inquisitively, they will inculcate discipline and obedience. I remember in my

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, I had to comply

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as a teenager and I was obliged to complete all the

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which were on my syllabus. It is true that I did not like all the

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but having a variety of

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I knew which one I wanted to study later on but

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developed a great sense of discipline in me.

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, I strongly believe that some

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should be compulsory

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all

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and

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these young

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and they should abide

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. At a later stage, they should have the right to choose the subject of their choice.