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IN SOME COUNTRIES OWING THE HOME RATHER THEN RENTING ONE IS IMPORTANT ? WHY MIGHT THIS BE THE CASE? DO YOU THINK IT IS A POSITIVE SIDE OR NEGATIVE SITUATION?

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In several countries,
owing
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 a residential property is much more important than leasing one for citizens. In
this
 essay, I will explain why
this
 could be caused and
it
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if it
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 could be
the
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a
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 negative circumstance.
Firstly
, many
people
 think that holding a
house
 could be a symbol of wealth and they would like to show their friends and colleagues in order to
fulfill
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fulfil
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 their desire for fame.
For instance
, Japanese
people
 used to think that having their own
house
 was a symbol of economic affluence and
majority
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the majority
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 of them tried to work so hard for buying
the
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house
.
Furthermore
, it can be much easier to renovate any
rooms
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room
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 without
permit
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a permit
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. Residents who have their real estate can change
an
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the
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 interior and exterior of the
house
 as they want whereas
people
 who pay a
rent
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 fee may not remodel them based on
contract
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a contract
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 with their housing owner.
However
,
this
 could be
negative
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a negative
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 tendency because a lot of
people
 can suffer from housing
loan
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loans
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 for several decades. In fact, many American
people
 suffered financially and many of them lost their property when
subprime
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the subprime
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 mortgage crisis occurred.
Moreover
, it can be difficult to move to another place if residents face an issue with
neighbors
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neighbours
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 because once they have
home
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a home
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, they may not have
economic
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the economic
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 affordability to change the residential site. From
a
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apply
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research about residential issues in South Korea, 60% of those having their own home say that they would not be able to move out even if they were involved in noise or other
neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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 problems. To sum up, it may be more valuable for some
people
 to have their own residential property than to lease one in order to meet their desire for fame and remodel their rooms.
However
,
this
 might not be
the
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a
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 great situation because of financial
issue
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issues
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 and disputes with the
neighbors
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neighbours
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.
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