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Some people are born to be a leadership others belive that leadership can be learned. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is a saying that some
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 are born to be a leader while some
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 think
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 can be learned.
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 essay will discuss both views and shows my own opinion. Some
people
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 have the gift of
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 because of their genes and heredity. The gene decided
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's traits.
People
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 have various personalities, and most are born them with. We can see children who share similar backgrounds,
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, they still have different characters. So as
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, we can see some
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 are born to be a
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. When they were young, they were very active in school and want to be monitors and
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, while others are quiet and like to be alone.
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, self-confidence drives them to become
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, and self-confidence plays a key role to become a
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. Because
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 need to have the confidence to eliminate all kinds of doubts.
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, some
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 do have the talent to be a
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.
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,
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 is a skill that can be learned. The
first
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 way to master captainship in practising. Management needs to practise because experience is important to it. The more experienced
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 are, the stronger their captainship will be, and they will become good
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.There are many
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 who have no talent for captainship, but they still become successful
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 through hard journeys.
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, we can learn the knowledge of administration and practise it. Nowadays, an increasing number of
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 choose to attend management courses. It can give them more guidance, and make them overcome the obstacles in management. To sum up,
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, some
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 do have a talent for administration, we can still learn it the day after tomorrow.
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