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some believe that children should be taught from a young age ow to handle money. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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There are people who believe that handling cash should be taught when they were young. In my opinion, teaching
children
 how to spend
money
 is the way that makes them more mature and helps them avoid problems in their
future
. One of the reasons why
i
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 support the idea of giving
children
money
, despite the fact that giving
children
money
 may contain possible issues
such
 as they may be involved in crimes like being robbed or stealing
money
, those still can be solved by teaching them the way to react when dealing with possible problems that may happen in both present and
future
, so that will give the experience to overcome the following challenges.
For example
, when it comes to a student whose graduation is coming near, he or she may have to deal with many problems in the
future
such
 as being married and spending
money
 on many projects or personal life and demand or saving the
money
 which may not be taught at schools but their
parents
 who have many experiences that have been saved for years. Another reason for my opinion, not only helping
children
 prepare for the
future
 but
also
 teaching them the value of cash and being hard work.
This
 is because
money
 is not always available to gain for free like what
parents
 do for their
children
 but they have to work hard to achieve it.
Consequently
,
children
 will teach themselves lessons about how valuable
money
 and being hardworking is and
also
 form a saving habit to support themselves and their
parents
.
For example
,
children
 in Asia are taught to open a small shop that sells stuff
that is
 not in use or juices and
parents
 will let them spend their earned
money
 to buy whatever they choose to buy and their
parents
 will help them sort out the unnecessary items,
this
 may help them gain more knowledge of what they should buy or not. In conclusion, some individuals think that helping the little ones manage their
money
. I believe that teaching
children
 the importance of handling funds effectively will provide them with the knowledge of managing funds as well as the value of
money
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