Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own idea.

In the
last
few years advertising has become highly important in marketing. Many companies allocate large amounts of budget to introduce their products through
advertisements
. The majority of
people
believe that
advertisements
can effectively change
people
‘s minds to purchase a particular
product
, while others argue that ads do not attract attention anymore. In
this
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I am going to discuss both sides of the argument and express why I think
advertisements
can affect the public in order to buy things.
First
and foremost, some
people
hold the view that
advertisements
are no longer effective in changing
people
's decisions.They claim that companies by repeating their products over and over make the
people
subtle about that specific
product
. As a consequence, the advertisement not only becomes common but
also
cannot attract attention.
Hence
, cold calling, Junk mails and spam mails are good examples of making
people
subtle. Many
people
have encountered these types of ads during the day and do not pay attention to them.
Conversely
, a growing number of
people
find
advertisements
much persuasive and advantageous. It is their belief that optimizing a situation to advertise products wisely can be significantly effective.
Furthermore
, celebrities who have been followed by a great number of
people
can be helpful. The majority number of
people
are interested in consuming
such
things.
For instance
, Ronaldo is a popular athlete, when a
product
is introduced on his Instagram many
people
decide to purchase it.
That is
to say, the special
product
's features stick in
people
's minds for their
next
shop. All things considered, mass media is totally effective in introducing a
product
. Personally, I think optimizing a suitable situation for advertising
such
as social media, celebrity endorsement and
product
placement can be the best and most persuasive.
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