In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of student, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the past decade, lessons were used to educate on class with numerous
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However
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technology
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technology
for teaching,
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of people believe that they do not have to participate in
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anymore. From my point of view, I partly disagree that people think learning through digital platforms is better than attending
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class for some reasons below.
To begin
with,
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receiving
knowledge from
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a professor
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who
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is still
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and effective method to study
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university. When joining class
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can collect plenty of experience from the lectures of the professor.
For example
,
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can ask as many questions as they want to have a deep feeling about the lesson.
As a result
, learners can
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the lesson and enrich their
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of knowledge.
By contrast
, Studying on digital platforms
also
have its benefits. Learners can be more active in learning, they can study anywhere and anytime they want.
Moreover
, there is a multitude of courses on the Internet,
therefore
learners can repeat the lesson to get to know more about it or they can contact online teachers or through educational platforms for more details with just one click.
For instance
, students no need to move from house to school anymore, at a new age they just need to open their technological devices to attend online classes through some applications used for learning.
Hence
, online studying is no longer cumbersome but
also
more convenient, some colleges even
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this
technique to teach in cases when schools must be closed. In conclusion, learning on the Internet and participating in studying rooms in
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are equally good and effective for students. Even so, I believe that online education will be useful and become the best choice for people whose house is far from school or unable to move out of their place of residence
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