Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
 Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A large number of governments believe that their economic progress must be a priority, while some people think that development in other fields is equally important. I agree with the

second

statement and I will explain my reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.

Firstly

, nowadays, the

economy

of a country plays a significant role in improving the conditions of people who live there.

for instance

, America has the highest rate of production and exportation of all countries, since it has the most technologically advanced companies in the world like Apple or Facebook, which have a market cap of billions of dollars, resulting in the US

having

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the most powerful

economy

in the world.

on the other hand

, if the governments only care about their economic goals, they may become weak in one particular area.

For instance

, there are some countries that are powerful economically, but have a poor performance in other areas

such

as education or technology.

for example

, United Arab Emirates has a powerful

economy

due to the high amount of oil they export to other countries, but has an awful performance in education.

As a result

,the number of educated people is quite low in

this

country. In my opinion,

although

the economic conditions in a country are significantly important, a good

economy

doesn't guarantee to have a good situation in other areas, and if one area gets weak, it can affect the other parts as well.