More children are becoming overweight. Therefore, daily physical education classes should be compulsory in primary and secondary schools. To what extent do you agree?

While a lot of people hate

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as it not only time-consuming but put children at

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risk of getting hurt. From my perspective, I agree it should be compulsory since it is critical that students have a habit of

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every day. Waste of time, sweaty, boring and

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hurt easily is many

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impression of physical education

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of all, many

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as basketball or baseball may cause a lot of collisions, which is very dangerous for children who

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vulnerable

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, doing exercise every day took the elementary

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a lot of time as learning fundamental knowledge is the

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priority of those kids.

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but not least, it is doubtful that

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taking

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of

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physical education will help children who

overweight

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Overweight

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result

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from eating too much or an unbalanced diet and so on.

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, taking sports

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not the main way to deal with the problem of obesity.

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, there are still some advantages of taking

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with,

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doing exercise is not the

essece

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essence

method of

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address

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of being fat, it still

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people healthy;

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, it

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's stamina and

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them awake.

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, a regular routine can

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sense of self-

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discipline

and prevent teenagers from skipping

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,

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reinforce

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sense of partnership and achievement as

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contain many

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of team

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building

, which is

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as valuable as other knowledge in textbooks. In conclusion,

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compulsive

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learning physical education can not cope with

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of being overweight efficiently, but it still boasts many fortes

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worth taking regularly.