More children are becoming overweight. Therefore, daily physical education classes should be compulsory in primary and secondary schools. To what extent do you agree?

While a lot of people hate

PE

classes

as it not only time-consuming but put children at

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risk of getting hurt. From my perspective, I agree it should be compulsory since it is critical that students have a habit of

exercise

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every day. Waste of time, sweaty, boring and

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hurt easily is many

student's

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first

impression of physical education

classes

.

First

of all, many

of

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PE

classes

such

as basketball or baseball may cause a lot of collisions, which is very dangerous for children who

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vulnerable

vulnerble

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vulnerable

.

Secondly

, doing exercise every day took the elementary

student

a lot of time as learning fundamental knowledge is the

first

priority of those kids.

Last

but not least, it is doubtful that

if

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taking

classes

of

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physical education will help children who

overweight

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are overweight

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.

Overweight

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result

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from eating too much or an unbalanced diet and so on.

Hence

, taking sports

classes

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not the main way to deal with the problem of obesity.

Nonetheless

, there are still some advantages of taking

PE

classes

.

To begin

with,

although

doing exercise is not the

essece

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essence

method of

adress

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address

problem

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of being fat, it still

make

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people healthy;

for instance

, it

enhance

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student

's stamina and

keep

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them awake.

Secondly

, a regular routine can

training

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student's

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sense of self-

dicipline

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discipline

and prevent teenagers from skipping

classes

.

Lastly

,

PE

classes

reinforce

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sense of partnership and achievement as

it

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contain many

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of team

bilding

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building

, which is

also

as valuable as other knowledge in textbooks. In conclusion,

compulse

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compulsive

student

learning physical education can not cope with

problem

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of being overweight efficiently, but it still boasts many fortes

that

is

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worth taking regularly.