The municipal corporation in the area where you live has decided to demolish a historical building to build a shopping center. Write a letter to the mayor of the corporation. In your letter: You have to explain why it is important to preserve the building and suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community.

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
to express my dissatisfaction with the municipal corporation's decision to demolish the old Ranjit
fort
in
Chandigarh
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the Chandigarh
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region.
i
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I
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have been residing in
this
area since my childhood and that probably explains why
i
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have
emotional
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an emotional
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attachment
with
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this
fort
. I admit that the
fort
is in very bad condition but
i
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believe that some repair efforts may result
into
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the
longavitiy
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longevity
of
this
fort
and increase the historical awareness among local communities.
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