As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes nowadays. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?
Over the past few years, family sizes have become much smaller in developed countries especially. There are several reasons for the trend and it undoubtedly affects the community to a certain degree. Both causes and effects will be presented in the following paragraphs.
In the first place,
due to
the inflation rate in developed countries, the cost of raising children is getting more expensive, Linking Words
therefore
, the majority don't want to have many kids, which leads to many Linking Words
small-size
families. Both the cost of education and the expenses of basic daily essentials are way higher than it was in the past. Correct your spelling
small
For example
, social research has discovered that the expenses of bringing up one child are ten times higher Linking Words
compare
to ten years ago. Replace the word
compared
Secondly
, the lifestyle and mindset of people have changed a lot in today's modern era. Young couples prefer to live without their parents and Linking Words
also
tend to have kids very late or even plan not to have one. To illustrate, Linking Words
according to
a recent report, youngsters who got married already claimed that they would like to have more personal and two-person time rather than being bothered by elder people and kids.
The trend can definitely impact our society in various ways. Linking Words
To begin
with, having fewer children means that the parents can focus on a specific child, take extremely good care of him and educate him properly, which will reduce the proportion of bad teenagers in society. Linking Words
However
, decreasing the birth rate might have a negative impact on society in the future. Since the young workforce would become fewer, the productivity of the countries may get lower Linking Words
accordingly
. Linking Words
As a result
, economic growth will be uncertain and concerning. Linking Words
Furthermore
, as the family sizes are not Linking Words
big
as they used to be, there are fewer family members who can take care of each other, causing a burden on our communities as well. Rephrase
as big
For instance
, if an elderly falls sick and has no one to rely on, the government has to use social resources to look after him.
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To sum up
, it is inevitable that in the near future, the small-size families will spread more widely and exert both positive and negative impacts all over the world.Linking Words
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