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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In today’s modern world we always need more time to do our work and cook, which half-cooked
food
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 or
convenience
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products
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 can solve our problem. I believe these types of
foods
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 are really helpful for humankind,
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, they have some negative points which I discussed in
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, the
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 of
convenience
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products
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 is not cheap and economical and for a normal person's salary, the
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 is too heavy.
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, you can not use them as a routine
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 for your every day.
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, the companies selling these types of
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 have to keep their benefits on their sales,
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, they will drop their product's final
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 in the market more than the real cost.
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, which means if you make those
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 by yourself, the final
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 would be less than the company has chosen.
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, most
convenience
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foods
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 need only a few minutes to get ready and use. It means, they were cooked in a factory before and you only have to warm them which really can help you to spend your time on other things and not worry about your
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.
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, teachers have to leave their house early so they can not prepare
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 for themselves,
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, they can buy these types of
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 for their lunchtime in school because they can not cook when they are teaching. Ergo,
convenience
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foods
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 were revolutionary in the
food
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 industry and can solve your problem in only a minute. To conclude,
convenience
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products
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 are not a good option for your routine life because of their
price
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, but they can be beneficial in situations where you do not have time to cook. I believe
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 positive point is more important than the other one.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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