Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Nowadays
people
must obey the Use synonyms
rules
and Use synonyms
laws
of the country they are living or visiting. Use synonyms
Whereas
, some individuals find it difficult and inane to follow them. In my essay, I support the idea of following the Linking Words
rules
and Use synonyms
laws
.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
people
feel safe knowing that they are under the guard of the government, whose Use synonyms
laws
save them from different kinds of frivolity from other individuals' side. The illegal punishment that someone can cause to others would be analysed in court. Use synonyms
For instance
, if some man would make a scene in a public place by starting to injure someone, he would immediately caught by police officers, Linking Words
then
talk about the incident and given a fair punishment Linking Words
according to
his actions. Linking Words
As a result
, feeling the government's law strength in the faces of local police officers makes Linking Words
people
rethink their thoughts before they act.
The second possible reason why society is better at following the Use synonyms
rules
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laws
is that the terrain, where Use synonyms
people
live and were born, remains clean, tidy and developed. As the city is not wiped out by its citizens, it means that it increases in its beauty and stands out in its social skills. Use synonyms
For example
, imagine the mirrored situation, in Afghanistan Linking Words
people
destroy their own motherland maintaining the civil war Use synonyms
instead
of modernizing it and making it suitable for a new generation. Linking Words
Therefore
, that territory which stays under terrorists' occupation will not bring the country to a successful and serene future.
In conclusion, Linking Words
rules
and Use synonyms
laws
must be followed by every individual to bring the nation to a successful, developed and serene future. Use synonyms
Otherwise
, there will not be any future at all the since world will be destroyed.Linking Words
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the introduction properly paraphrases the prompt and clearly presents your thesis statement. Maintain a logical flow throughout the essay and ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next.
task achievement
Work on developing your supporting arguments with more detailed and relevant examples. Additionally, ensure that each body paragraph relates clearly back to the thesis presented in your introduction.