Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

While going to

school

, some scholars have to earn

money

for expenses because of that they do not have enough

time

for schooling and they always feel stressed and under pressure. Unless

this

situation is like that scholars can improve themselves.

Moreover

, they will have enough

time

for hobbies and individual

time

. Life is so hard to study with work together and some people face

this

problem because they don’t have

money

to enrol in any

school

. Families want that their boys or girls went to

school

and had a great job but some families haven’t got

money

even for food how can they support children in their education? At

this

point, the government must help those who faced

this

problem. Authority can give some scholarships who are successful in academic departments.

Consequently

, learners get some

money

for expenses and focus on their educational life. All employers must have a conscience about their student employment

in addition

bosses should be supervised by authorities.

For example

, my friend Julia is a great person who studies veterinary medicine and she works at a veterinary clinic at the same

time

. When we want to hang out with friends after lessons she can not come with us she can’t go to

school

also

.

Furthermore

, her boss makes her work hard and pays less. If the government supervise her boss they will give a penalty for

this

matter. In conclusion,

this

is a vast problem for students and

this

issue should be resolved by the government immediately.

Besides

, solving lacking

time

for education problems makes a profit for citizens in the future when people

trained

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their jobs.