Today more and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem. Do you agree/disagree?
Obesity is a common health problem in modern society due to the fast
food
culture introduced worldwide. While some propose that overweight issues can be solved if the fast Use synonyms
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chain can increase the pricing of their meals, I believe it is not enough and think it should be assisted by great eating habits and a proactive lifestyle.
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, especially adolescents. Students and teenagers usually get pocket money from parents, but mostly they would only receive money to eat cheap daily. Use synonyms
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, fast Linking Words
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chains like KFC or MacDonald's have meals ranging from 20 to 40 Hong Kong dollars, and teenagers can easily afford them. If it is severe, adolescents can consume these fast Use synonyms
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becoming obese from overeating junk Linking Words
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will ignore great dieting habits because they find them annoying. Use synonyms
For instance
, Hong Kong's workers have a fast-paced working lifestyle and do not have much spare time, so preparing healthy meals would be impossible since they are busy working. Linking Words
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, they often order fast Linking Words
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instead
of a pre-made meal and consume a considerable amount of fat and sugar daily. Linking Words
Moreover
, Hong Kong's workers mostly sit at their offices 9 hours a day, so they cannot metabolise fat well and accumulate excess fat if they do not work out, leading to obesity.
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's obesity if they are without a healthy diet and great workout plans.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite