Some Believe the people are natural born leaders while those feel that leadership skills can develop, discuss both views and give your opinion.
Leadership
qualities
are God gifted
. Add a hyphen
God-gifted
Some time
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Sometimes
this
quality is associated with a leader
by birth
and some time
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sometimes
this
quality can be develop
by different means. Different Change the verb form
be developed
be developing
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people
peope
have Correct your spelling
people
different
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a different
view
regarding Fix the agreement mistake
views
this
phenomenon. in this
essay
both Add a comma
,essay
the
views will discuss briefly.
Some Correct article usage
apply
People
argue that leadership
skills
are attached with
leaders by Change preposition
to
birth
and these qualities
are transfer
In genes. it Wrong verb form
transferred
happen
in Correct subject-verb agreement
happens
children
of school at very
early age, some Add an article
a very
children
have extra ability to lead a group of class in sports and in different
type of activities. It Add an article
a different
also
observed that those Add a missing verb
is also
children
who lead their class and their team in Correct your spelling
childhood
chlidhood
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childhood
they
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apply
becomes
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become
good
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a good
the good
leader
in their life. These observations
shows
that Change the verb form
show
leadership
skills
are found in the blood of a person and they have no need to develop these qualities
.
On the other
hand
some Add a comma
,hand
people
have a view that leadership
qualities
are neither Inherited nor naturally develop, but these skills
are the result of Correct your spelling
hard work
hardwork
and Correct your spelling
hard work
observations
. They argue that Fix the agreement mistake
observation
the
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apply
leadership
skills
can be develop
by providing education and knowledge, by giving Change the verb form
be developed
be developing
experience
of different events and by taking Inspiration from a great Add an article
the experience
an experience
leader
. A person can also
develop his Leadership
abilities By
his Change preposition
Through
Observations
. Leader
is a person who knows the way and Change the article
A leader
also
tell
the way to the other. Change the verb form
tells
For example
, in South Asian countries, it has been noticed the children's
of most politicians are Change noun form
children
also
national
Add an article
a national
leader
. They have no Fix the agreement mistake
leaders
leadership
qualities
by birth
, but they Correct your spelling
develop
developed
develope
Correct your spelling
develop
skills
by the guidance of their parents and their own observations
as well. In addition
with
some Change preposition
apply
people
only focus on their goals and never compromise on their settled principles, so the
other Correct article usage
apply
people
starts
to follow them. Change the verb form
start
For instance
, Nelson Mandela Was the
great Correct article usage
a
leader
, he never compromise
Change the verb form
compromises
on
his rules and develop his skill to lead In hardships, and bring a big revolution Change preposition
apply
in
Change preposition
to
the
history.
In conclusion, it can be said that Correct article usage
apply
although
some leaders are by birth
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the birth
a birth
leader
, Fix the agreement mistake
leaders
yet
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apply
the
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apply
leadership
qualities
are some time
hidden and these can be Polish or can Replace the word
sometimes
be develop
through knowledge, experience, Change the verb form
be developed
observations
, training, and hard work.Submitted by tauqeer.imperial on
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