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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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In
this
 contemporary world, many nations show various
stories
 related to criminal activities in the form of storybooks and T.V series, which have become famous widely. Most of its content is based on true events and there is a thrill and suspense which links the audience completely with them and that's why it has become famous. In my opinion, these
stories
 have been useful for mankind to get an education on criminal minds and they become aware of it. These
stories
 are widely spread and popular around the globe. to commence with, the criminal
stories
 always include a sense of suspense and thrilling actions by which the audience enjoys watching and predicting the future actions taken by the individual involved in
crime
. Many people experience and hear about the crimes in their societies which creates a sense of interest.
In particular
, it helps in becoming aware of the mishappenings and they get useful knowledge to handle it in many ways. to illustrate, CID, an Indian
Crime
 T.V series presents the true criminal cases that happened in the past which are solved by a team through which the audience gains information about the criminal system running in the country.
Therefore
, these types of dramas and books are becoming popular despite the clarity of violent activities shown in them. According to my viewpoint, the criminal content shown in books and T.V series depicts many high levels of illegal activities taken by the criminals by which some illiterate and unemployed individuals of our society are able to catch some useful tips and tricks to do the
crime
 and earn money within a short lifespan.
Moreover
, they represent the involvement of some advanced technologies which are used to hack security systems
such
 as handling security cameras or door locks.
Although
,
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 the process or punishment criteria taken by the higher authorities create fear in them
as a result
 of watching every aspect of
crime
, they become aware and able to pre-plan to tackle every situation type.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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