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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashion. The new fashion will be to have several other career or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant examples.

#idea #career #fashion #money #education #life
The aim of having
a
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odd
career
 is becoming an old fashion.The new fashion will be to have more than other
career
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 or more ways of
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earning
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earring
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earning
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 money and
farther
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further
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 education will be anything that continues throughout life.I will discuss both views.As far as my opinion is concerned, people who
having
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 a single
career
is
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are
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 better than others.
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 with, a single
career
it
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has many advantages as
compare
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 to several careers because
on
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in
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one
career
 you can focus only on it.I will give you the example of Microsoft they have worked only on
one
 thing and now
world
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 knows Bill Gates Paul.He was
fouced
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focused
forced
 on
one
 goal.His aim was to become
richest
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the richest
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 person in the world and he worked on only
one
 thing
not
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 on several goals.
On the other hand
, people who
has
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 many careers in their life can struggle in their different careers because they have to
focused
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 on each
career
 which may damage their all
career
 focusing on
one
caree
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career
care
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