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You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing regarding an international
flight
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 I missed
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 a reason which was not under my control. On the date of 13th May, I was supposed to attend an important business meeting in Ottawa, and I had a connecting
flight
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 from Toronto to Montreal. Unfortunately, I am stuck in Montreal because of uninformed changes in
flight
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 time.
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, I could not reach on time and missed a
flight
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 to Ottawa. There was no email sent from the airline about these changes.
As a result
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 of
this
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, I lost my client and had to hear bad reviews about my business.
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, I have had to pay his fees from my own pocket, As these changes were made by your airline without giving any advance information to the customer, I would like to get a full refund for
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 trip, which is $1200. I look forward to hearing back from you. yours faithfully, Janki.

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task achievement
To enhance task achievement, ensure all parts of the prompt are fully addressed, including a more detailed impact on you and a clear explanation of what occurred at the airport.
coherence cohesion
Work on varying sentence structures and incorporating a wider range of vocabulary to develop a more sophisticated writing style, which can further improve the score.
logical structure
You did a great job structuring your letter with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing were appropriately formal, fitting the tone of a letter to an airline.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, which helps maintain a coherent flow throughout your letter.
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