Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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claim that when they come across an advertisement, they tend to ignore it, while others feel that they are convinced readily to buy things.
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try avoiding adverts, I agree with the latter point of view because ad campaigns are well targeted to hit the
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emotionally. On one hand, advertising has become
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crucial part of any marketing
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and companies spend
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amount of their overall budget.
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, companies follow
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thorough market research and smartly target the right
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on their preferred platforms like social media,
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or emails.
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, once a visitor has bounced off the website without buying, there are techniques developed to retrace that visitor and target him explicitly with attractive visuals. Once the visitor is
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with the same advert, he thinks twice and revisits the website and may eventually buy the product.
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, organizations take
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of influencers or celebrities to market their product in order to create an impact on the
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relevant
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which works impressively and the
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start impulse buying.
On the other hand
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, ads if not properly targeted by the company can
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the prospect which may result in
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avoiding it.
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with the cut-throat competition in companies,
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are shown advertisements in vast numbers which could
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them and they end up buying nothing.
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, adverts won't connect with
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people
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because they aren't
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intended
for them. Drawing from my own experience, I was once shown ads on youtube regarding women's cosmetic products which
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totally irrelevant
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me. Even if I am really in need
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particular type of product and I come across it,
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, I found it unattractive or not
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up to
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my expectations, it is certainly because it is not marketed properly. In conclusion, I believe advertisements are easily capable
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convincing
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to buy products if they are targeted to the right
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and on the right platform.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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