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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea.Some people think they should be banned.Do you agree or disagree. Give examples for your answers.

Nowadays, environmental
pollution
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 is the greatest threat to our world and there are several reasons behind it. Some
people
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 believe that
plastic
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 bags that we can see everywhere are the main for
pollution
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 of land and sea and they should be banned. I completely agree with
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 idea and it would reduce the high level of environmental
pollution
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.
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 with, shopping bags which are made of
plastic
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 have a primary role in increasing
pollution
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.
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plastic
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 alone is harmful to nature and unfortunately
people
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 throw them into the sea and nature which can lead to many problems for animals, plants, and generally the whole ecosystem of that area.
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, in the
last
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 few ,years the number of ocean creatures has decreased dramatically due to the high level of
pollution
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 caused by
plastic
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 materials.
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, many animals and species are becoming extinct due to the eating
plastic
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 which is in nature.
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, another significant issue that
plastic
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 causes, is that shopping bags damage the crops and soils because of the effect of chemical contents in
plastic
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 materials. they pollute the soil and
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, the crops are polluted and
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 directly affects
people
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's health.
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,
this
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 can lead to many diseases like cancer, blood pressure, and eventually death of
people
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. In a nutshell, it is common knowledge that
plastic
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 materials are dangerous for the environment and since
people
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 do not attention to
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 issue, there is no other option except to ban it because it can lead to many problems not only for the environment but
also
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 for human life.

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