Afriend you made while travelling abroad has written to ask you for advice about doing language classes in your area. You know about local language school that might be suitable for him tell your friend about the language school Say why you think the language school would be suitable for him explain how to apply for the language school

Dear Sam, Great to hear from you, I hope you're doing well. I'm thrilled to know that you're thinking to move here to find a job. London is a densely-populated city.
Therefore
, you will get a good opportunity to find a suitable job for you. I agree with you, that you need to find a language school to improve your speaking skill
first
, and I'm sure you did your own search, but let me tell you, that I asked for you my friends and many of them recommend Language House. It is old school and it has a 5-star rating on Google. what is good about
this
school is that it offers a dormitory for the students from abroad for a reasonable price if they have registered for the 5 courses.
Besides
that, it is located slap-bang the city centre, which means you can, either cycle or even walk to any place you need. I served the web and found out that they start a new course on the
first
of every month ,but you have to inform them two weeks in advance that you will be with them. The admission fees and the registration form can be done by phone call within 10 to 15 minutes only. Anyway,let me know what you decide, and for any questions please drop me a line and will help you out with anything I can do for you. All the best, Noura
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