Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Some people claim that the
extinction
of particular plant and animal species
is the major environmental problem, while others feel that there are other far more important problems
. Although
extinction
of Correct article usage
the extinction
species
shouldn't be overlooked, I agree with the later
point of view because Correct your spelling
latter
problems
like global warming, deforestation, acid rain, etc are of extreme concerns
on a global scale.
On one hand, it is argued that losing plants and animal Fix the agreement mistake
concern
species
is the biggest concern, however
, in a
bigger picture, the root cause should not be ignored. There are multiple environmental Correct article usage
the
problems
which are leading to extinction
of Add an article
the extinction
species
and efforts should be to resolve those issues first
. Moreover
, number
of forest reserves should be increased for Change the article
a number
the number
the
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apply
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endangered
endagered
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endangered
species
and provided with the best medical facilities. Awareness should be spread globally to not hunt animals particularly
among tribals. Add the comma(s)
,particularly
For instance
, the main reason for extinction
of dodo was that they were hunted in large numbers.
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the extinction
On the other hand
, global warming which is the biggest danger to mother earth is increasing day-by-day
. Deforestation is rising due to urbanization which is forcing animals to migrate, Correct your spelling
day by day
however
, surviving in a new environment is difficult unless the need for food and water are met. Industrialization is growing at a fast
Add a hyphen
fast-paced
paced
which is leading to air and water pollution. People are suffering from Replace the word
pace
lot
of health Change the article
a lot
problems
, for example
, depletion
of Correct article usage
the depletion
ozone
layer is causing skin Add an article
the ozone
problems
and the average life span of humans is also
decreasing with time.
In conclusion, I believe that if other environmental problems
like global warming, deforestation, air
and water pollution are taken care of, we can witness Correct word choice
and air
increase
in the number of Add an article
an increase
species
which are now on the verge of extinction
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