Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people claim that the

extinction

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of particular plant and animal

species

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is the major environmental problem, while others feel that there are other far more important

problems

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.

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extinction

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the extinction

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of

species

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shouldn't be overlooked, I agree with the

later

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latter

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point of view because

problems

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like global warming, deforestation, acid rain, etc are of extreme

concerns

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on a global scale. On one hand, it is argued that losing plants and animal

species

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is the biggest concern,

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, in

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bigger picture, the root cause should not be ignored. There are multiple environmental

problems

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which are leading to

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extinction

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the extinction

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of

species

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and efforts should be to resolve those issues

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.

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,

number

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a number

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of forest reserves should be increased for

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apply

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endangered

endagered

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endangered

species

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and provided with the best medical facilities. Awareness should be spread globally to not hunt animals

particularly

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among tribals.

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, the main reason for

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extinction

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the extinction

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of dodo was that they were hunted in large numbers.

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, global warming which is the biggest danger to mother earth is increasing

day-by-day

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. Deforestation is rising due to urbanization which is forcing animals to migrate,

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, surviving in a new environment is difficult unless the need for food and water are met. Industrialization is growing at a

fast

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paced

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which is leading to air and water pollution. People are suffering from

lot

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a lot

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of health

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depletion

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the depletion

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of

ozone

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the ozone

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layer is causing skin

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and the average life span of humans is

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decreasing with time. In conclusion, I believe that if other environmental

problems

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like global warming, deforestation,

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and air

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and water pollution are taken care of, we can witness

increase

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an increase

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in the number of

species

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which are now on the verge of

extinction

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.