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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
Nowadays, more and more people want to live in foreign countries.
However
, some people argue that having to speak in another
language
 can cause critical social and practical issues. I strongly disagree with
this
 statement because people can easily learn a new
language
 and get
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 apps.
First
 of all, human beings are unusually flexible to unknown situations, as well as a community speaking
foreign
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language
. You are prone to learn
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language
 of the country where you live more effortlessly, as you have greater opportunities to practice in
this
language
. From my own experience, I didn’t observe problems communicating with locals after some adaptation period. Eventually, I think that the demand for using unfamiliar
language
 can not be serious
hardle
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hurdle
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handle
 in the social aspect.
Secondly
, there
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 a huge range of modern services,
such
 as translators and electronic
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, ready to help with communicating in foreign languages. They are convenient and powerful tools, so you can use them even during real
conversation
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.
For example
, Google
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 is capable of
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 recognizing and automatically determining
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. Apart from that, many developed countries provide information for immigrants in their
language
. As I see it, there are many ways to simplify your life as a foreigner by using apps.
This
 essay discussed how human flexibility and electronic services can help to minimize problems that can occur living in countries where you need to speak another
language
. Personally, I prefer to consider foreign languages as broad opportunities rather than a source of social and practical difficulties.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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