A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to
offer
my services as an unpaid volunteer at your museum
. I have always loved your facility and spent years wandering through it both as a child and as an adult. I would be honored
to Change the spelling
honoured
offer
my services and to help a museum
that has meant so much to me.
As a volunteer, I could offer
a deep knowledge to the museum
. As a student, I focused on the history of our local area and
so could help curate exhibits, speak to visitors, and engage with the public. I am Correct word choice
apply
also
skilled with computers and would be happy to help revise the museum
’s website to share it with a wider audience. An updated website will encourage visits and allow people from all over the world to experience what the museum
has to offer
.
I could work Monday–Wednesday between 1:00–5:00 p.m. and all day on weekends. I would love to volunteer more hours, but those times are best for my schedule because I work at another job on Thursday and Friday and attend classes in the mornings.
Yours sincerely,
Donald CookSubmitted by bb_emperator on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Continue to structure your letters with clear paragraphing, dedicating each paragraph to a single idea, as you have proficiently done. This enhances readability and makes your argumentation easier to follow.
Coherence & Cohesion
Keep using varied sentence structures and transitions between paragraphs to maintain the flow of your writing, as demonstrated in this letter.
Task Achievement
For task response, you've addressed all parts of the prompt effectively. To enhance your writing further, consider providing more specific examples or experiences that demonstrate your commitment or connection to the museum's work.
Task Achievement
Continue to use a polite and appropriate tone for formal letters. You might explore using different phrases to express gratitude or enthusiasm, adding variety to your language use.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite