Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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is something usual nowadays, especially

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became so after the appearance of

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broadcasting. There are many arguments about the benefits and drawbacks of that, and in that essay,

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will be explained thoroughly. There are many

types

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of

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, some are more popular like soccer, others are less.

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all

of

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sports

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the sports

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have their own audience and

fans

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, who are ready to buy special merchandise or advertised stuff in the

sports

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events.

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money is crucial for many

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of

sports

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in

modern

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the modern

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day, even for those which have millions of strong

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throughout the world. One of

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is cybersport, it is a non-athletic and young, but still popular type of

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. Unsurprisingly, many authorities ignore gaming competitions and do not recognize

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, so do not see any necessity to fund cybersports, like other

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of

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.

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due to

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the enormous

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size of

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the fanbase

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fanbase

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fanbases

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, many gigantic international companies mainly from

food

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the food

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and gaming industry support

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type of

sport

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in exchange for

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apply

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advertisements from

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gaming clubs and teams.

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the biggest sponsors of cybersports are HyperX, Mountain Dew, Redbull,

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and Doritos

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. Thanks to them

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cybersports is thriving and making

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big progress year by year. Despite

of

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that, there are

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disadvantages of

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products

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being advertised by famous players. When

fans

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see the high and ideal performance of their favourite players and hear the words of their idols telling how the equipment from their sponsors improved their game, advertised

products

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start to become some sort of

brand

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, and special for

fans

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. The light example is Air Jordan, the legend of basketball Michael Jordan wore and advertised it, and now it became a

brand

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itself. It is bad for the

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, for the

company

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and for the

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itself, as the product becomes a

brand

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, the demand for it increases and so does the price.

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,

product

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the product

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becomes popular and expensive with no true improvement in

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quality. It boosts the stance of

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company

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the company

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in the market that makes

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product, making it more powerful with no increase in competitiveness of the business.

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, if

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occurs many times and simultaneously several

products

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of the

company

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become

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brand

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brands

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,

then

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it might lead to the result where the single

company

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controls the whole market.

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example

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apply

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Nike,

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the

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a

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company

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that is

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strongly linked with

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sports

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shoes

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, especially

for

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basketball, as it manufactures

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whopping 90% of all basketball

shoes

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. The hype around the

company

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is so high, because of the legendary players wearing their

shoes

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, that no one even

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with the quality of their

products

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or the relevance of the price of their

shoes

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. To conclude,

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advertising in athletics is

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common sight, and it has its own drawbacks and benefits. Sponsorship is one of the main sources of income for some sportsmen, while for some

types

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of

sport

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it brings

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decline.