Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Advertisement in
sports
is something usual nowadays, especially it
became so after the appearance of Correct word choice
since it
sports
broadcasting. There are many arguments about the benefits and drawbacks of that, and in that essay, it
will be explained thoroughly.
There are many Correct pronoun usage
they
types
of sports
, some are more popular like soccer, others are less. Nonetheless
all Add a comma
,Nonetheless
of
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sports
have their own audience and Add an article
the sports
fans
, who are ready to buy special merchandise or advertised stuff in the sports
events. These
money is crucial for many Change the determiner
This
types
of sports
in modern
day, even for those which have millions of strong Correct article usage
the modern
fans
throughout the world. One of suchб
is cybersport, it is a non-athletic and young, but still popular type of Add an article
the suchб
sport
. Unsurprisingly, many authorities ignore gaming competitions and do not recognize it
, so do not see any necessity to fund cybersports, like other Correct pronoun usage
them
types
of sports
. However
due to Add a comma
,However
enormous
size of Correct article usage
the enormous
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the fanbase
fanbase
, many gigantic international companies mainly from Fix the agreement mistake
fanbases
food
and gaming industry support Correct article usage
the food
this
type of sport
in exchange for the
advertisements from Correct article usage
apply
the
gaming clubs and teams. Correct article usage
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Namely
the biggest sponsors of cybersports are HyperX, Mountain Dew, Redbull, Add a comma
,Namely
Doritos
. Thanks to them Correct word choice
and Doritos
the
cybersports is thriving and making Correct article usage
apply
a
big progress year by year.
Despite Correct article usage
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of
that, there are Change preposition
apply
also
disadvantages of sports
products
being advertised by famous players. When fans
see the high and ideal performance of their favourite players and hear the words of their idols telling how the equipment from their sponsors improved their game, advertised products
start to become some sort of brand
, and special for fans
. The light example is Air Jordan, the legend of basketball Michael Jordan wore and advertised it, and now it became a brand
itself. It is bad for the fans
, for the company
and for the sport
itself, as the product becomes a brand
, the demand for it increases and so does the price. In other words
, product
becomes popular and expensive with no true improvement in Add an article
the product
a product
the
quality. It boosts the stance of Correct article usage
apply
company
in the market that makes Add an article
the company
a company
this
product, making it more powerful with no increase in competitiveness of the business. Moreover
, if this
occurs many times and simultaneously several products
of the company
become brand
, Fix the agreement mistake
brands
then
it might lead to the result where the single company
controls the whole market. As
Change preposition
For
example
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an example
the
Nike, Correct article usage
apply
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is the
the
Correct article usage
a
company
that is
strongly linked with the
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sports
shoes
, especially for
basketball, as it manufactures Change preposition
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the
whopping 90% of all basketball Correct article usage
a
shoes
. The hype around the company
is so high, because of the legendary players wearing their shoes
, that no one even arguing
with the quality of their Wrong verb form
argues
products
or the relevance of the price of their shoes
.
To conclude, the
advertising in athletics is Correct article usage
apply
the
common sight, and it has its own drawbacks and benefits. Sponsorship is one of the main sources of income for some sportsmen, while for some Correct article usage
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types
of sport
it brings the
decline.Correct article usage
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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