You are interested in attending a short course at a college in an English speaking country. Write a letter to the college administration. In the letter: • mention what course you would like to attend • give details about your educational background and work experience • say why you choose this college

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Dear Principal, I am excited to write

this

letter as I would like to attend a business management 6 months course at ABC college in London.

Firstly

, I did my full-time graduation course in commerce and taxation with distinction marks from a reputed university in Hyderabad. Soon after my bachelor's, I got an opportunity to work with a mind-blowing company in the pharma industry where I obtained multi-skilled in planning and executing the task.

In addition

, I have

also

attended a few seminar classes on the best management topics throughout the course.

Last

but not the least, gaining profound experience in business management consulting is the value added to my profile. As you know ABC college is the best institution among the top 10 world-class colleges.

This

is known for advanced topics and well-exhibited centre for all categories in leadership presentations.

On the other hand

this

is very close in proximity to the city bus stand and other transit points and I am sure that

this

would be the best option which I selected now. Best regards, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Tue Sep 13 2022

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