You are interested in attending a short course at a college in an English speaking country. Write a letter to the college administration. In the letter: • mention what course you would like to attend • give details about your educational background and work experience • say why you choose this college

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Dear Principal, I am excited to write

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letter as I would like to attend a business management 6 months course at ABC college in London.

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, I did my full-time graduation course in commerce and taxation with distinction marks from a reputed university in Hyderabad. Soon after my bachelor's, I got an opportunity to work with a mind-blowing company in the pharma industry where I obtained multi-skilled in planning and executing the task.

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, I have

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attended a few seminar classes on the best management topics throughout the course.

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but not the least, gaining profound experience in business management consulting is the value added to my profile. As you know ABC college is the best institution among the top 10 world-class colleges.

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is known for advanced topics and well-exhibited centre for all categories in leadership presentations.

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is very close in proximity to the city bus stand and other transit points and I am sure that

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would be the best option which I selected now. Best regards, Lakshmi.

lakshma999Tue Sep 13 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

178 words

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