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In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years. Do you agree?

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Some communities believe that the
leaders
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 of business, politics, education or any
sector
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 should not work for more than
five
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years
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.
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 method is helpful for everybody in society from an individual to the industry. In my view, I agree with the given statement because
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 approach will lead to fresh growth in every
sector
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. On the one side, From earlier days to the present day, most
leaders
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 are entrepreneurs with multiple skills. Entrepreneurs will develop society and technology with manifold ideas,
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 when a fresh individual is given a
chance
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 to develop their working
sector
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then
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 there will be fresh development in every
sector
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. And it is better to step back from their role after
five
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years
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 because
leaders
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 will be bored and don't have any new ideas to advance their sectors.
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, In politics, after every
five
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years
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, there will be a
chance
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 for communities to elect their
leaders
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. I think it is one of the best solutions to develop their country.
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, In Industries, it is better to replace their
leaders
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 after
five
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years
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. In the Industries, multiple products are produced, so by replacing their leader fresh products will be generated which is helpful to develop their organization. With
this
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 approach, every industry will get a
chance
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 to generate fresh products with manifold ideas. To sum up, It is the best way to leave their profession as a leader after
five
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years
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. In
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 way, individuals, government, and every person in the society will get a
chance
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 to develop their nation.

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