Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rapid increase of

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in some parts of the world has overshadowed local

businesses

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' ability to compete. While some hold the view that

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trend can lead to the extinction of local communities, I disagree with

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assumption for two main reasons.

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, the expansion of

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and

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stores

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will provide alternative

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for those who will lose their occupations.

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,

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pattern of development will create a window of novel opportunities for the community. The

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reason I oppose the above-mentioned statement is that

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the development of large

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in an area will exert a negative impact on small shops,

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provides other

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for those whose

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get closed.

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, their owners can work for the newly opened

department

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stores

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, a phenomenon observed in many

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, numerous observations in a multitude of cities in Iran have indicated that large

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tend to employ more than 76 per cent of the shopkeepers who have lost their

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.

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, the establishment of

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stores

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in a place can introduce new ways of earning money. These large

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demand a wide range of marketing and advertising activities

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a much broader scale compared with small shops. Another development could be the transportation and distribution of products, which should be conducted more extensively. Logically,

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can offer far more opportunities for local people.

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, a survey in Denmark has indicated that the opening of large

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can create a wider range of occupations for local inhabitants, raising their income by 15 per cent. In summary, while some contend that the quick rise in the number of huge

supermarkets

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thwart

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local

businesses

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, I believe that

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can not be the case because it can provide alternative

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for individuals whose

businesses

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are adversely affected.

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, more diverse opportunities,

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as marketing and transportation, are offered by the establishment of large

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stores

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