You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter •explain why you have moved •describe the new house •invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Alex.
I hope you get my letter in the best of spirits. You will be happy to know that I bought a new
house
but Change preposition
in at
at
different location, and want to invite you to my new Correct your spelling
a
house
and place.
Last
time, On Diwali occassion
, when you visited my country, I was living in a suburban area, where you were able to explore the mix-match of rural and urban lifeCorrect your spelling
occasion
,
and get a chance to closely look at our culture and tradition. Now, a month ago, me and my family moved to a downtown location because my father had gotten promoted, and transferred to the city site. We bought a three-bedroom Remove the comma
apply
house
, all rooms are very spacious, and big backyard filled with lush greenery, and two big trees. The house
is really beautiful having two parking slots.
I hope that you visit my new estate soon, and this
time, we will see some sightseeing locations in this
metropolitan place and nearby, and also
explore some entertainment places. Your course is going to be completed soon, so you can come in your holidays, and make my companion to commute to new places.
I'm waiting to know about your visit plans
Yours truly
Lisha Lokai.Submitted by kanwalkaur05 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and develops that idea with specific details. Some paragraphs seem to mix different details together.
Coherence and Cohesion
Pay attention to linking words and phrases to enhance the flow of information and ideas throughout the letter.
Task Response
Make sure that the purpose of each paragraph is clear and consistent, avoiding unnecessary repetition of ideas.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
