Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my disappointment regarding the Dell laptop which I bought recently from your store. For the whole week it worked fine,
then
suddenly it got crashed and now it is not starting. I guess there is some malfunction in the motherboard. I called the customer care of your company and did not get a proper response ,
hence
writing you
this
concern. I have a very important assignment to deliver by
end
Correct article usage
the end
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of
this
month and because of
this
, the issue I am blocked now.I would like you to replace my laptop as soon as possible. Please schedule a pickup of the laptop from my home or I can drop it to the store as well. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours Sincerely, Pooja
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task response
Ensure to provide specific details about the laptop's purchase and warranty in the letter to strengthen the task response.
greeting and closing
Ensure to use a more formal greeting and closing in the letter to improve coherence and cohesion.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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