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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that many carbonated drinks and artificial fruit juices contain a huge amount of sugar which leads to different health disorders. I agree that
such
 artificial and extra-calorie products should be made out of reach of the general public to discourage them. There are numerous health disadvantages of artificially flavoured drinks. Consumption of
such
 high-sugar beverages causes obesity, which leads to disastrous well-being and other disorders in the human body. One
such
 awful effect of
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Diabetes
also
 called the silent killer. The most common
diabetes
 is type 2
diabetes
 which is taking over the world at an alarming speed, for ,example Many people in my family especially the younger generation are affected by
diabetes
 because they eat high-calorie snacks on a daily basis. Other diseases include blood pressure, different heart diseases and decreased stamina. They
also
 cause poor dental hygiene because they contain carbonic acid which deteriorates our teeth. These products have empty calories meaning that they have very high amounts of calories and provide no nutritional benefit. We should try to replace
such
 beverages with water in our daily life. I think that we should hike the prices of
such
 items and impose heavy taxes on them to discourage their use.
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 we should make the general public aware of the awful effects of high sugar manufactured snacks, through social media campaigns, seminars, tv programs, ted talks or by house-to-house flyers. We should
also
 make sure that fast food outlets and restaurants have an alternative to high-sugar cold drinks and juices. We should
also
 provide flavoured water at a cheap rate to encourage its use. In conclusion, the Public should be made aware of the disadvantages of high-calorie beverages and snacks and their prices should be increased to save the health of people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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