Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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some debates about focusing on today than tomorrow for both countries and individuals. In ,general I support the idea that
people
should always imagine and plan their
future
, especially in countries which are responsible for the entire nation. I will explain my reasons in
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following paragraphs.
First
of all, I think human needs a
dream
and hope to achieve their lifetime pursuit, without it life could be less meaningful. If a person only lives by today and stops planning about the
future
, they will lose interest in developing themselves for a better world.
Therefore
especially for countries having hope means everything for their survival in
this
fast-changing era.
Secondly
, by stop thinking about the
future
will kill human curiosity. I believe that human is naturally curious, and
this
creative thinking lead humanity to develop and improve ourselves for a better
future
.
For instance
, we always talk about the American
dream
, where everybody has their
dream
and imagination about their
future
which gives
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motivation to their nation and
also
people
all over the world.
Lastly
,
people
thinking about consequences that might happen in the
future
is protecting our society from social distraction and violence. Usually individuals before making any mistake or committing
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any crime, they normally think about their ramifications. For ,example there are a lot of movies like “End of the world” if you find out that there will be no tomorrow
then
what kind of chaos
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might create
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However
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some
people
spend too much time planning their
future
, yet can not enjoy their present life fully. To conclude, given the reason above I strongly disagree with the idea that we should only live by today. I am personally a big dreamer and I enjoy imagining our
future
and have hope for a better life.
Moreover
, every nation and country or individual should have a
dream
to pursue and a
future
to plan.
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  • Present enjoyment
  • Future planning
  • Long-term satisfaction
  • Short-term gratification
  • Economic planning
  • Infrastructure development
  • Spontaneity
  • Immediate pleasures
  • Balanced approach
  • Mindfulness
  • Strategic foresight
  • Anticipation
  • Well-being
  • Present-mindedness
  • Prosperity
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