Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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some debates about focusing on today than tomorrow for both countries and individuals. In ,general I support the idea that
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should always imagine and plan their
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, especially in countries which are responsible for the entire nation. I will explain my reasons in
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of all, I think human needs a
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and hope to achieve their lifetime pursuit, without it life could be less meaningful. If a person only lives by today and stops planning about the
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, they will lose interest in developing themselves for a better world.
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especially for countries having hope means everything for their survival in
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fast-changing era.
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, by stop thinking about the
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will kill human curiosity. I believe that human is naturally curious, and
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creative thinking lead humanity to develop and improve ourselves for a better
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, we always talk about the American
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, where everybody has their
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and imagination about their
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which gives
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motivation to their nation and
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people
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all over the world.
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,
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thinking about consequences that might happen in the
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is protecting our society from social distraction and violence. Usually individuals before making any mistake or committing
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any crime, they normally think about their ramifications. For ,example there are a lot of movies like “End of the world” if you find out that there will be no tomorrow
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what kind of chaos
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might create
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some
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spend too much time planning their
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, yet can not enjoy their present life fully. To conclude, given the reason above I strongly disagree with the idea that we should only live by today. I am personally a big dreamer and I enjoy imagining our
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and have hope for a better life.
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, every nation and country or individual should have a
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to pursue and a
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to plan.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Present enjoyment
  • Future planning
  • Long-term satisfaction
  • Short-term gratification
  • Economic planning
  • Infrastructure development
  • Spontaneity
  • Immediate pleasures
  • Balanced approach
  • Mindfulness
  • Strategic foresight
  • Anticipation
  • Well-being
  • Present-mindedness
  • Prosperity
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