Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There
is
some debates about focusing on today than tomorrow for both countries and individuals. In ,general I support the idea that Change the verb form
are
people
should always imagine and plan their future
, especially in countries which are responsible for the entire nation. I will explain my reasons in a
following paragraphs.
Correct article usage
the
First
of all, I think human needs a dream
and hope to achieve their lifetime pursuit, without it life could be less meaningful. If a person only lives by today and stops planning about the future
, they will lose interest in developing themselves for a better world. Therefore
especially for countries having hope means everything for their survival in this
fast-changing era.
Secondly
, by stop thinking about the future
will kill human curiosity. I believe that human is naturally curious, and this
creative thinking lead humanity to develop and improve ourselves for a better future
. For instance
, we always talk about the American dream
, where everybody has their dream
and imagination about their future
which gives a
motivation to their nation and Remove the article
apply
also
people
all over the world.
Lastly
, people
thinking about consequences that might happen in the future
is protecting our society from social distraction and violence. Usually individuals before making any mistake or committing to
any crime, they normally think about their ramifications. For ,example there are a lot of movies like “End of the world” if you find out that there will be no tomorrow Change preposition
apply
then
what kind of chaos it
might createCorrect pronoun usage
apply
.
,Change the punctuation
?
However
some Add a comma
,However
people
spend too much time planning their future
, yet can not enjoy their present life fully.
To conclude, given the reason above I strongly disagree with the idea that we should only live by today. I am personally a big dreamer and I enjoy imagining our future
and have hope for a better life. Moreover
, every nation and country or individual should have a dream
to pursue and a future
to plan.Submitted by nsarangua on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!