Throughout history, people have dreamt of living in a perfect society. However, there is still no agreement about what a perfect society would be like. Why do people want to turn this dream into a reality? What can people do to help create an ideal society?

After world war two, so many changes
taken
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place, like people’s lifestyle, eating habits, social
life
and businesses; It has taken many things away from
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humankind
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human kind
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for
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instance, home, food, education and joy
life
.
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great
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for predecessors were food, education, clothes, shelter and job with average wages.
However
,
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present day
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things got changed in every aspect, everybody has their own expectations and dreams to chase. To make dreams come true every single
individuals’
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contribution is mandatory. I will elaborate on the same in
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paragraphs.
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with, for every individual, to live
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a happy
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happy
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and quality
life
a flawless
society
is pretty much required. As there is no particular definition
regard
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to perfect
society
, even though,
perfect
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a perfect
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society
would
consists
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,
nice
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dwellings, superior hospital services, transportation
well organized
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system, job opportunities with higher wages and many more. A perfect
community
offers
polished
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a polished
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and secure
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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. Elegant communities can
also
deliver tidy
neighborhood
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neighborhoods
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, 24/7 hospital services and
structured
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study
environment
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. Indeed, to create
perfect
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a perfect
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society
, civilians must grow,
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, citizens must be literate , skilled,
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and expertise
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expertise
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in their respective fields; and
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everybody
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every body
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everybody
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should work and pay taxes to
government
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the government
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.
In addition
to
that
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all members
in
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community
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the community
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must help each other and treat equally. Every person
take
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responsibility and
provide
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free
community
services
against
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lowered class people,
eventually
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it leads to
raise
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a raise
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community
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. To conclude, as mentioned above, to make dreams become true to live in
perfect
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a perfect
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community
and lead
life
, civilians have to do their part by working and paying taxes and
follow
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rules and regulations made by Government. If Government is wealthy and strong communities can be developed and
serve
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better.
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