In some cultures, childrens are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message.

Children

in some cultures are often taught that if they try hard enough, they can accomplish anything. Most

parents

wish their

kids

to succeed,

however

,

this

message can be a double-edged sword.

Children

might see

this

message as inspiration and start to strive for themselves.

Nevertheless

, in the reality,

kids

cannot achieve their goals only by trying hard, it involves complicated things,

such

as personal restrictions or financial conditions.

To begin

with, in some countries,

parents

teach their

kids

to be realistic. The main reason behind

this

is that merely

dreams

cannot feed a family. In

this

case,

parents

would limit

children

’s aims in life.

However

, ambitions, sometimes play a major role in making

dreams

come true. Lack of imagination, and

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no opportunities to dream big, are reasons why

children

cannot succeed. In wealthy families,

kids

tend to have more support from

parents

in pursuing goals since they don’t have to worry about money. Unconditional love and trust given to

kids

are something that can boost them to accomplish their goals.

On the other hand

,

dreams

do not always come true in a brutal reality. Convincing

children

that nothing can stop them from pursuing

dreams

can have negative impacts on them.

For instance

,

kids

who are

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challenged, when compared to other students, usually have few chances of becoming professional athletes. In

this

aspect, it is not suitable to tell

kids

that every goal can be attained merely by trying hard. Knowing personal limitations is the lecture that

children

should learn while growing. Or there might be chances that they would become arrogant. In conclusion, from my perspective,

children

should be educated with love and trust.

Parents

should support

kid’s

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goal

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if

that is

something possible. Encouraging words can push

children

beyond their limitations.

However

, helping

children

to face

the

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realistic restrictions is

also

parents’

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the parents’

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responsibility.