There is an increasing trend of antisocial behavior by individuals and in most cases it is blamed on society. How can society be the blame? What needs to be done about these people?

The world is witnessing a spurt in misbehavioural and
unrespectful
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attitudes. There is a large number of reasons that should be taken seriously;
however
, some causes
such
as general upbringing as well as dysfunctional
families
will be discussed in
this
essay.
Consequently
, some possible solutions will be given.
First
of all, to address the cause of antisocial behaviour, individuals simply need jobs. People without professions will behave in an aggressive manner. More importantly, their pent-up anger will lead to disrespectful behaviour.
Additionally
, some individuals have been brought up in
families
with poor conditions.
For instance
,
In other words
, they have not been taught social morals in an appropriate way and end up reflecting the same inappropriate behaviour in their society. Some feasible solutions would be,
firstly
, for governments should provide job opportunities for eligible people who are seeking for being employed.
This
chance should be equivalently given to both men and women. If adults can find suitable occupations,
then
they will be more respectful to each other.
For instance
, some well-developed European countries are good examples of
this
issue with low crime rates.
Secondly
, authorities should be sensitive to low-income
families
living in poor conditions. They should support them in terms of sending their children to school even though children in rich
families
might be involved in juvenile delinquency. To conclude, to overcome
this
matter of unacceptable conduct regime must take preventive measures, including importing work options and ensuring proper schooling.
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