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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults.

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There is no doubt that these days transferring to cities is the most controversial in the world. In
this
 essay will discuss
this
 case and will write down my point of view . On the one hand, The
people
 who argue with
this
 case has beneficial. their opinions stand on that the best way to develop themselves and there are many reasons.
Firstly
, Many universities exist and they can find better institutes or schools.
Secondly
, They have a chance to study and work at the same time.
However
. It is not easy to find a job
this
 time. And that life costs much. but
this
 community is better for
people
 to know each other,
Still
Add a comma
,Still
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 they trust their areas and it is very difficult to go away. that clearly that more and more
people
 move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. On other hand, others believe that villages now can study online and they can get anything they want via the internet.
Furthermore
, The world became a small city. The most advantage is that living expenses are less than in big towns.
In addition
, Health care is better and there are many choices for everything .these
people
 always looking for development. In my conclusion, After analysing both viewpoints. It is clear to simply
this
 case I think life is easy in huge cities than in small because you can find all life aspects in an easy way
such
 as. the study, health, and work.
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