You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to the article wrongly mentioned in your Times International magazine published on 14-Oct-2021. The article on page number 23 states that Venice is very newly developed which is not correct as I am living in the same city for 50 years. It is a very old township and there are many heritage sites available for tourists.
Although
you have mentioned in your magazine some areas are very old but it is not the case. It is very important for your company to provide as much as accurate information in your magazine.
This
can avoid the wrong perception of the readers and could save the economy of developing countries. The false information could mislead people and can create a negative impression about the town or city, In order to avoid
this
type of mistake, every editing company should cross-check the facts before publishing it, I look forward to your positive response, Yours faithfully
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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