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some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society . discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The chart illustrates the percentage of separated spouses in Finland and Denmark between 2011 and 2015. Overall, the features of
Sweden
 slightly declined throughout the period. Despite that, the number of divorced families in Finland surged moderately over 4 years. The total proportion of divorces in
Sweden
 outweighed the whole amount of Finland’s. In 2011 the separation rate was around 43 per
cent
 in
Sweden
.
Then
, the value demonstrated a growth which approximately 5 per
cent
 and reached its highest feature in 2012. After that, the divorce data in
Sweden
 fell gradually and decreased to about 36 per
cent
 in 2015. Finland’s rates were nearly 40 and, 36 per
cent
 in 2011 and 2012 respectively. After that time the value increased to around 42 per
cent
 in 2014.
Additionally
, the rate remained the same in 2015.
Moreover
, Finland’s rate was higher than
Sweden
’s in 2015 around 3 per
cent
.
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